Story Rating: 4 out of 5 paddles
Sting Factor (kink): 4 out of 5
Short and Steamy and Straight to the Point!
When Katalina first sees John on the street he exudes everything that is submissive. She knows she must have him and pounces immediately. When Katalina first approaches John, he sees an opportunity to live out a fantasy he has always had.
The progression of events in this short story is perfect. There is a little bit of anticipation as their first meeting is drawn out. Katalina realizes that John isn’t experienced in the BDSM world and has an overwhelming desire to train him to be hers. The fact that John is a submissive with a bit of a bite added something to his character which all leads up to extremely HOT sexual chemistry!
The BDSM elements are definitely there. They are not to the extreme, but that is to be expected with John’s inexperience. The fact that John was the inexperienced one in this and his Domme had to teach him was a nice twist on most stories out there.
Reviewed by Cami