Loaded Question by Cassandra Carr
Story Rating: 3 out of 5 paddles
Sting factor (kink): 3 ot of 5
Rob adores his girlfriend, Daisy. She’s a Southern belle girly-girl, which is perfect, except for one thing. As much as Daisy likes sex, she draws the line at oral. She’s not good at it, and Rob has resigned himself to doing without. That is, until Daisy offers to get a tutor. Is this a great idea or the worst mistake Rob has ever made?
The blurb above pretty much descibes this short story. A couple hire a Dom to teach the girlfriend how to give her boyfriend a blow job. The boyfriend Rob watches while his girlfriend learns the fine art of sucking cock by performing on the Dom. The premise is a little strange and you have to wonder just how bad was she that Daisy had to pay someone to teach her to be better. Of course Rob’s heads (and I mean both heads) almost explode watching his girl sucking another guys dick.
I’m rating this a solid three in both story and kink although neither really thrilled me. But I know that this writer can and has done better than this. I think you should be a big fan of bjs if you are going to read this because otherwise you’re left with a kind of “meh” feeling in the end. If you aren’t into reading about bjs then I suggest you try something else by this author because she really is a talented writer.
Reviewed by Elizabeth