Story Rating: 1 out of 5 paddles
Sting Factor (kink): 5 out of 5
Review SPOLIER WARNING:
Our kinksters are Alessandro Medici-Visconti, politician and Alessia Ferrara, newly transferred to be his assistant.
This is a serial story in that the ending of the book is not the end of the story; you will need to read the next story for answers.
Throughout this story there were editing problems, awkward sentence structure, missing words, incorrect words and misspelled words.
There is really no build up to this story. Within minutes of meeting his new assistant Alessandro has Alessia locked in his office and after a brief discussion about her family he’s demanding she finger herself in front of him. Before the day is out he’s having unprotected sex. Her inner dialogue states she’s only consenting to his outlandish demands because she needs this job. This woman who supposedly before she met this man had never even fingered herself for her own pleasure is not only allowing this but then goes home to do it several more times.
The next day he has her off on a business trip and punishing her with a belt for failing to follow his orders with no previous BDSM discussion and no warm up. Then there’s the anal sex with no lube, just a vibrator in her pussy. Next, he’s insisting she be in the same room while he bottoms in a m/m BDSM scene. At this point I’m wondering if I’m reading a story or a bunch of sex scenes strung together impersonating a story. Then things change and the author starts to dedicate more time to the characters and their developing relationship. There are a lot of day to day, mundane interactions, including the fact that Alessia needs a LOT of sleep and the actual SCANDAL doesn’t happen until the last half of the book.
The whole premise of a politician taking sexual advantage is not new, nor is the billionaire and the needy girl a new concept. There’s a lot of things that made this story hard to read and hard to believe and therefore hard to keep interested in reading.
Reviewed by: wyldheart