Making Him Wait by Kay Jaybee
Story Rating: 2.5 out of 5 paddles
Sting Factor (kink): 2.5 out of 5
Maddie Templeton has always been an unconventional artist. Themes of submission and domination pulse through her erotic artwork, and she has happily explored these lustful themes both on and off the canvas. But, when Theo Hunter enters her life, she is presented with a new challenge. Maddie sets out to test his resolve as she teases, torments and toys with him. However, as Maddie drives Theo to breaking point, she soon becomes unsure whether her own resolve will hold out! At the same time, Maddie must put on the exhibition of a lifetime. As the hottest gallery in town clamors for her best work, Maddie pushes her models harder and higher until they are physically, sexually and emotionally exhausted. Will Maddie’s models continue to submit to her, or will she push them too far? And will she be ready for the exhibition in time? The only way to find out is to wait and see…and the waiting only makes it sweeter!
This book is very crafty. The author did a magnificent job tempting and teasing the reader and the sexual tension between all the characters was off the charts. The author also did a fabulous job as she weaved the supporting characters into the book in a way that helped make the book more realistic and ramped up the sexual tension.
This book is filled with text sex and phone sex. Phone sex and text sex might work wonderful in the real world but I don’t think it translates well into paper.It was very choppy and lacked a lot of heat it was supposed to bring to the story.
Tied to the Kitchen Sink by Kay Jaybee
Story Rating: 4 out of 5 paddles
Sting Factor (kink): 4 out of 5
Kay Jaybee is a prolific author of considerable renown who specializes in writing kinky books and short stories. Her latest collection of three short erotic stories, Tied to the Kitchen Sink, is an exercise in fanciful erotica with D/s overtones that will please both her current and future fans. None of the vignettes in this slim volume are meant to mirror real life, but by no means does that stop them from being sexy and enjoyable reads.
The title story involves a young man coming home to find a naked woman chained to his kitchen sink, a birthday present from his roommate, who is discreetly absent. For reasons not adequately explained, this scenario is one of his favorite fantasies and sort of dovetails into the woman’s as well. Before this very short story concludes there is a bit of spanking with a wooden spoon and the suggestion that some sort of waxing fun will be in the offing.
Next up is Becky, a story that portrays an outrageously depraved work environment, in which a strict disciplinarian boss rules his employees through corporal punishment and sexual humiliation. Even for times prior to sexual harassment laws, this scenario is way over the top, yet as a fantasy it is powerfully erotic. Whereas it is not really possible to suspend disbelief while reading this story, it is easy to be aroused by the actions taking place in it.
The Voyeur by Kay Jaybee
Story Rating: 4 out of 5 paddles
Sting Factor (kink): 5 out of 5
Anya is pulled into a world of sexual sadism when she accepts a job with Mark Parker as his personal assistant. Anya is paired with a woman of her choosing, Clara. Clara is hired to be the housekeeper for Mark Parker. Whilst completing their day jobs, Mark puts them through a series of his fantasies. To date, there have been twelve fantasies which he records and then rates them.
The book starts out with Fantasy twelve and it’s a rough gangbanging delight in the decadent club Discreet. Anya is given away to be done with as anyone wishes. Before anyone uses her, she’s fitted with both a penis gag sticking out of her mouth and a blindfold. Hours pass as men and women beat, lick, suck, fuck and spank her. How Anya does not go out of her mind with the sensory overload, it is anyone’s guess. Clara is not left alone to watch. Instead, she’s been gifted to the club owner as a decoration for his private dinner party. She doubles as dessert.
The BDSM scenes in this story are blazing hot, one right after another. One could pose that this is merely one long gratuitous sex scene from start to end. This would be a wrong conclusion. Ms. Jaybee starts out with a bang and then delivers a conspiracy which explains the entire story. Even if the reader is frustrated with Mark at the beginning because he seems to set the girls up for failure, as the story unfolds, glimpses of Mark’s humanity reassures the reader. Mark truly adores both Anya and Clara. He wants the best for both of them and he is playing for keeps. His devious mind almost catches him and sets his girls to be taken from him. All of the sexual submission and training is for a purpose. It is for his final fantasy thirteen. Thirteen is quite the arduous one.
Xcite Books [link to buy]
Rating: 3.5 out of 5 Paddles
Yes Ma’am is a collection of six FemDom stories from Kay Jaybee from Xcite books. Overall, each of the six were very well written and professional – I enjoyed them all on some level. However, just as no two Dominas are ever going to slap you the same, I did enjoy a couple of the stories more than the others.
“Lying In Wait” was good story about a Cadet needing something that only the dominant military women around him could supply. Fans of strong women in uniform will particularly enjoy this. “Black” was full of mystery, allowing your mind to fill in a lot of the story around it. For those that lean more towards the masochistic side, this was the story for you. “Don’t You, Emma?” was very, very good – a story of a Domina and the inexperienced male and more experienced female submissives in her life. It was hot story – but not as hot as the best of the bunch, “Dear Claire”. At least for this sub, this was the best offering of the book. Where to start? How about complete immobilization, followed by some absolutely pitch-perfect objectification. Add multiple Dominas, some hot BDSM sex and helplessness and you get the story that I remember most when I think about this book.
Rounding out the book is “Not Taking the Tube”, a wham-bam-thank-you-Mistress-Ma’am story of spontaneous erotic interaction and “Rachel’s Twisted Tale”, a softer story that plums the depths of a submissive’s attachment and devotion to a Domina that includes the excellent closing line of “So this is the bit where we all live painfully, ever after..” If only all bottoms, subs and slaves have this same wish granted.