Undone Diva by Lila Dubois
Story Rating: 4.5 out of 5 paddles
Sting FActor (kink): 4 out of 5
This was a quick, fun read, with hot sex scenes, a bit of adventure, and a likeable hero and heroine. Sasha is the star of a number of action movies, but she is blackmailed when she makes a mistake and finds out one of her secret Doms has filmed a scene with her submission. She takes the issue to her lawyer, Emory.
Emory not only takes care of the threat in an intriguing, non-violent way, but offers Sasha something she really needs-a Dom who knows who she is and with whom she can be herself. Their first session is steamy and satisfying, but to both their surprise, they also enjoy spending time with each other outside the bedroom. After some misunderstandings, they begin a real relationship. But there is a threat in Sasha’s past and it could tear the lovers apart.
The novella was well written and well plotted. BDSM elements include bondage, clamps, spanking, caning, wax play and anal play. Rougher elements are hinted at, but not described.
My only complaint is that it is a novella when it could easily have been developed into a full length book.
Reviewed by Karen
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Undone Dom by Lila Dubois
Story rating: 4.5 out of 5paddles
Sting factor (kink): 4 out of 5
Lulu can just feel that her life is about to change. As the owner and main model for “LuLu L’amore” along with her best friend Addie Sanchez, Lulu doesn’t really have time for anything more than waking up working her butt off than going to bed just to repeat the cycle again the next day. When a surprise visit from Master Alton to see Addie stirs Lulu’s blood it’s his parting comments that leave her on the edge “Ill come back for you”. Taking a leap and going to Alton at his request, took almost all of Lulu’s courage, what she sees behind his mask trips her heart and makes her willing to do anything for this man. Can Lulu be everything that Alton needs both in and out of the bedroom to prove her worthiness or will Alton only want her as his slave at the end of the day?
Master Alton is used to only seeing women as something to control. After so much time alone (even in a crowded room) he is in need of a new challenge. That challenge just came gift wrapped in Lulu. She is so different from all the other women from his BDSM world that she draws him into her light without even trying. Her willingness to dive head first into his world makes him feel things that he has never felt before. Can Master Alton learn to just be Alton around Lulu or will his hard earned control break her before he can change?
Undone Rebel (Undone Lovers Book One) by Lila Dubois
3 out of 5 Paddles
Amateur fetish model and rockabilly princess Adelita “Addie” Sanchez is not into porn. She modeled some nice kinky lingerie for a website and now she receives unwelcome solicitations for trashy porn magazines. Just when Addie thinks she has a real modeling job, she finds out the job is for BDSM photos. Without learning more, Addie turns up her judgmental snotty little nose to it because as everyone knows, BDSM is just nasty disgusting porn.
At this part of the story, I’ve pretty much had it with little miss hoity toity. Addie is not a main character I like. She is shallow in ways because she is designed with a huge chip on her shoulder. Her persona is an “in your face, accept me for my difference” yet she is judgmental of others. These are the worst hypocrites around. I don’t like her nor did I ever warm up to the snotty little snit. Lane on the other hand is amazing. He is just the right amount pushiness as a Dom to bring Addie around. Lane helps Addie learn about the facts of BDSM instead of the myths and fears she’s created in her crazy little brain. Lane is funny and I think too good for Addie.