Maggie The Milked Maid by Nicky Raven

http://www.amazon.com/Maggie-Milked-Milking-Erotica-ebook/dp/B007C710NK/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1339797914&sr=1-1&keywords=maggie+the+milked+maid 

ASIN B007C710NK

Story rating: 1 out of 5 paddles

Sting factor (kink): 1 out of 5

Blurb:

Maggie has fell on hard times, she can see no way out until she answers a mysterious advert in the newspaper for willing participants in a long term clinical trial. Cutting off all ties to the outside world, on the promise of a large payday Maggie enters the world of becoming an human cow for this mystery pharmaceutical company, and so begins her adventure into this new world…

Review:

I had high hopes based on the title of this story and was sadly very let down once I read it.  Let me start by saying that the subject matter intrigued me as this is a new fetish interest for me and I was excited to read something from another viewpoint.

Let’s start with the fact that the story is less than 10 pages.  While we learn a lot about Maggie and why she is getting involved in this milking, that’s about all we learn.  I liked Maggie and understood her reasoning for doing what she did, but there is nothing else to keep me interested.

I would hesitate to buy another book in this possible series – this is the continuing story of Maggie The Human Cow Milk Maid. This just felt like a teaser and I rated it low on the BDSM scale because there while there is milking, it’s not described as a fetish or anything like it.  It’s a medical situation and there is nothing erotic about the story for me.  And, I really wanted there to be!

Reviewed by Star

First Bondage by Nicky Raven

http://www.amazon.com/First-Bondage-ebook/dp/B0079KT2M6/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1337630076&sr=1-1 

ASIN B0079KT2M6  

Story rating: 2 out of 5 paddles

Sting factor (kink): 1 out of 5

This is the story of a guy’s first physical encounter with a Pro-Domme. After communicating with Mistress Raven online, Sam meets her in person and has his first BDSM session.  It is difficult to describe more of this short (12 page) story without giving away the plot but I can say that the setup of the story is typical of older femdom: the harsh, cruel mistress and the naive submissive.  You will get a glimpse into what a B&D experience feels to someone for the first time: “strangely like a moth to a flame he was being drawn in, pulled like an intoxicating drug to the pain, it was becoming much more than pain, it was becoming something he almost looked forward to. ”

“First Bondage” has a simple plot with undeveloped characters. The virtue of this story is that it is short. The author gets down to business quickly. The brevity and pace of  “First Bondage” will deliver maximum arousal for those who enjoy professional “old style” Femdom.

Reviewed by Dave94015