Story rating: 2 out of 5 paddles.
Sting factor (kink): 1 out of 5
This short (super-short) story is about a woman who signed a slave contract for a year. I hesitate to say more because this is only nine pages long and I’ll end up giving away the whole thing. I will say that this seems like a part of something bigger, or maybe a writing exercise. It seemed odd to me to take the time to publish a piece and make artwork etc for a story nine pages long.
The writing itself isn’t bad. The premise is ok. But it’s so short and the end leaves you hanging for part two. Part two, btw is just as short.
I don’t know if I’d recommend this, but I guess if you want to read a quick hot scene it’s ok. It’s $1.00 for nine pages which turns out to be pricey if you do the math. In the end I’m really just left wondering why… why it was written at that length. Why it was submitted and why it was published.
This has the same female character from the first story, only this time she is now acting as a Domme. I admit I liked this story a lot more than the first mostly because I identify as a Domme myself. Again a quick read with no real depth to it.
I’d be interested in seeing something else by this author that has a higher word count.
Reviewed by Elizabeth